Back to the Drawing Board

Hello all:  Well, I'm down but not out.  After preliminary feedback on my book "I've Come Home" I've decided to 'unpublish' it for now and rework, rework.  This is a learning process and I know I've got a durn good book in there somewhere between the first and the last page, I just need to do some major tweaking of the pages in-between.  My husband has always joked about my vocabulary and how 'verbose' I am which is apparently working against me when it comes to hooking the reader in.  All right, like the country's workforce has been facing, time to downsize.  Urrrgh.  Now that my husband has gotten to the point he'll probably live for five more minutes, I have work to do.  I'll be back . . .